06.12.2008

Correction of the 1st SA

Amber ****
Street 6
England
Dear Amber,

I hope you are fine. I'm very sorry for writing back so late, but I had a bad period because of my family.
My older brother Jack told me a secret and I promised him that I wouldn't tell anyone about it, but I really had to say it to Dad, because it could have been dangerous to Jack. I only wanted the best for Jack and I was so upset when Dad shoutet at Jack and afterwards he blamed me for the chaos. I really love my brother. And I was so angry with dad. Do you want to know the best part of this story? A couple of day later I found out that Dad behaved even worse when he was a youngster! In my opinion Dad only needed to let out his anger about Mum. For some years they don't see eye to eye on many things. My dad is a pig-headed person and very often bad tempered. But I can always talk to him in a normal way. That is a big problem in our family. No one, except me, says so if something is wrong. In my opinion everyone should immediately say when they have problems with something.
But now I'll come to the end of my sad letter to my best friend.
Yours,
Zoey xoxo

November 24, 2008
Camp Sunside
Wallstreet 1
New Jersey
Dear Madam June,
Job application
I was very pleased to read about your vacancy. My name is Chantal Werle and I've heard many good things about the "Super Camps". I would like to work there, because I'm very sociable and I love children. I've been working with children since I took the matura in "BORG Götzis". Your vacancy sounds like what I was searching for. My mother is a secretary and sometimes I help her with work and I'm very good at organizing and planning events.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Chantal Werle

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