To: Mr. Jones
From: Chantal Werle
Subject: A great summer in Vorarlberg
Date: 19th October
Introduction:
As you ordered, I looked up for some great facilities, amenities and spezial places in Vorarlberg. Now I will present you the results from my successful research:
Feldkirch Altstadt:
This city is just characteristic and romantic. There are many old cafés and little pubs around there, but also lots modern shops like H&M, Wäscheprinz, Sajas, DM, … The road is stoned with cobblestones and on the housetops are many doves, which are typical for this city.
Dornbirn Messepark:
For the shopping queens in the group, the most attractive place would be the big shopping center in Dornbirn with more than 60 shops. Clothes, jewelries, shoes, sport articles, flowers, or just a little cute present for family and friends, the youngsters will find everything they need there.
In Bregenz there is the biggest sea in Vorarlberg. You can walk down the Promenade near the sea, eat delicious ice cream and enjoy a sunny day between many other peoples. Or you can drive to the Rohrspitz in Höchst (also a part of the
Alpine-Coaster Golm:
The “Alpine-Coaster” in Schruns is one of the funniest things you can do in summer in Vorarlberg. You sit in a so called “Bob” and drive 6 metres above the ground downhill. A great adventure for teenagers!
So therefore I recommend Vorarlberg as a vacation spot for younger people and I hope that they will come to this lovely country.
1 Kommentar:
exp: "As you ordered" -> order = befehlen, Befehl
exp: "looked up for" -> did some research?
exp: the results of ...
"special places" -> "places of interest"
exp: "characteristic" for what?
exp: small pubs
exp: "lots modern shops" -> "lots of" is also colloquial and not formal style
exp: "The road is stoned with cobblestones" -> the cobblestoned roads ...
str: on the housetops (roofs) there are ...
exp: typical of this city
exp: shopping addicts / the shopaholics -> "queen" = Königin, Tunte -> So I assume you didn't want to say this.
exp: a small present
g: "jewelries" -> the word is uncountable, no plural possible
g: for the family or friends
Bodensee- lake Constance
"sea" = Meer
exp, exp: "between other peoples"
exp: to relax on the sandy beach
exp: "one of the funniest things" -> one of the most entertaining/exciting activities
wo, exp: "and drive 6 metres above the ground downhill" -> you slide (?) / ride (?) downhill ...
exp: "so therefore"
I like the way you advertise the place in your report and how you use adjectives - at least sometimes. There are quite a few expression problems, too, however.
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